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When it comes to video games, I tend to have a slight \"forget the princess, save the treasure\" mentality, which means I tend to dally in an area chasing nonessential objects, like tumbleweeds. I suppose there is something philosophical that can be said here, but I do not want to deaden the humor.
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Good job! I really like this one. Good pacing, and of course a great punchline. The speech bubble aesthetics are greatly improved, and the character dialogue is spot-on. My only quibble is that you could have added a transition between the last two panels, in two different ways depending on how you want to approach the set-up of the punchline. If Link is spotting the tumbleweed right after speaking to Fi, try adding a "wild tumbleweed approaches" panel before the last panel. If he's spotting the tumbleweed minutes later (and/or in a different location), you can use a larger gutter to indicate a longer period of time between panels. But in any case, the joke works well enough without either of these; no confusion and a well-established punchline.
But anyway. Great comic! I really enjoyed it.
